I saw your
eyes from the corner, yes I was there,
You didn’t
see me looking and I could only stare,
I didn’t
have the guts to tell you what I felt,
So I am
writing it down, in this paper right here.
Smoky eyes,
smoky eyes,
I wish to
die in them,
Don’t know
why, don’t know why,
They remind
me of heaven.
The way you
rolled them as you bought some stuff,
I felt
intoxicated as if by a cocaine snuff,
Did not know
your name, neither could I ask,
Speaking out
a single word, seemed an uphill task,
I tried to
stop myself, but couldn’t resist the fall,
As I drowned
in your eyes; in that lining of the kohl.
Smoky eyes,
smoky eyes,
I wish to
die in them,
Don’t know
why, don’t know why,
They remind
me of heaven.
I saw you on
the street, only you I could hear,
Every voice
felt was on mute, you were music to my ears,
I didn’t
have the power, to raise my arms and clap,
So I pen
down my applause, in this paper right here.
Smoky eyes,
smoky eyes,
I don’t know
what it is,
Smoky eyes,
smoky eyes,
I just want
to take a dip.
I know it is
a dream,
I’ll never
be in them,
All I pray
is for a chance,
To hold you
and look in,
Give me the pleasure;
I just want to die,
Sink and
drown and breathe my last, inside those smoky eyes.
nice...
ReplyDeletesmoky eyes, smoky eyes,
ReplyDeletethe saga is yet not unveiled,
the kohl line hid all dat somewhere in deep,
the eyes i rolled out is not out of merry,
i carry dem so planned leaving behind no query,
smoky eyes,smoky eyes,
behind dem is yet another me,
no one figures out dat dats da trick,
All are lost in darkness of carbon spread,
Still waiting for one who'll diminish dis mysterious thread.........
beautiful reply...You miss, must write your own poetry and blog it. I would love to read.
DeleteDat was so aswsm....sry cudn't stop myself ....jss tried to figure out a rough reply.....bt nthing nxt to urs...
ReplyDeleteOh no..it was beautiful.
DeleteThnkx for ur appreciation :) :).....
ReplyDeleteI shall think to try out ur suggestion ...!!!!!
anyways Good Job...keep going... :) :)